WIP Teaser: The Ten Commandments from my novella, The Comfort of Beanbags

Can’t resist – Earth has had a revolution, in a most bizarre fashion. Can’t say too much as it would dull the sheen of the story, but imagine if hard core clinical psychologists ran the world – or at least were instrumental at some distant point in the past. Here’s the Ten Commandments that everyone (who can) memorized:

  1. Science is the key to a sustainable future for humankind; you shall not place religion before science. Creationism is poison.
  2. You shall not practice, or even speak of, religion except in your home and in places of worship.
  3. You shall at all times obey the Prefecture Administrators, Prefecture Delegates to the World Council, and the Civilian Protection Officers, whose task it is to maintain the viability and harmony of human society.
  4. You shall respect your mother and father, who have allotted a portion of their lives to your wellbeing.
  5. You shall not kill or murder any citizen of the world, nor should you intentionally harm anyone.
  6. You shall not steal the assigned possessions of individual citizens or family units, nor shall you wantonly take shared possessions without due process.
  7. You shall not lie or distort the truth.
  8. It is an ideal to have no more than two live born children in your life, but you must adhere to the wisdom of the World Council regarding how many you may have. At this time it is one.
  9. You shall respect the common ownership of resources, lands and seas, as administered by Prefectures, and also respect the assigned resources and land to other individuals. It is a sacred task to not squander your, or shared, allotments.
  10. You shall not work or carry out any form of business on Sundays, as it is a time to rest and bond with your family unit.

Rambling Thoughts on ‘Making It’

Some people might be offended with some of this post, or disagree. I apologize to the former, but caveat with a simple statement – this is my journey and my observation, and by necessity must work on a generalized level. I can’t be condescending, by the way, because one person who is being described here is myself. 

This post is written from the viewpoint of a speculative fiction writer.

I will cover a few topics in writing and publishing, but at the heart, it is about what journey should a writer take to ‘make it’. What are the pitfalls and where does it go wrong and right. I use the term ‘make it’ because it doesn’t have anything specific hanging off it. It is meant to be general and fit all. For me, ‘making it’ means being respected in my genres of writing and making a good enough living to carry it out full time. I would be ecstatic if fame and fortune followed, but that is a whispered hope – I would be a very happy and contented man ‘(vegemite’, for my fellow Australians) indeed to achieve the lesser definition.

My view of how to ‘make it’ has metamorphosed several times over the last several years, the period where I decided to really make a go of ‘making it’ (hmm almost tautological, if not recursive). I started off going the ‘traditional route’ – where you submit or query agents and publishers and convince them to read your first three chapters and love it, want more, and sign you on. Not long after that kick off I also realized that writing short fiction is a well established route to ‘making it’ – get industry to take notice and build up one’s street cred. So I started to write a lot of short fiction. A year or so later, I started to published in mainly obscure magazines, ezines and anthologies – around 12 acceptances a year, and I am still running at that rate. I should add that I love writing short stories now.

But then I got frustrated. I really wanted to be published. Pfaw to those who say being a writer is needing to write. For me it is needing to write and be read. Self publishing, buoyed by innovations in digital printing and publishing, meant it was easy peasy to do, but I held off. But it sure was tempting. I will talk more on that later.

I met like minded people and we formed a small publishing house. It started with a bit of an identity crisis – thinking it can help with self publishing as well as ‘traditionally’ publishing – in a disorganized way to help fellow upcoming writers – but we soon realized the model didn’t work (mainly because from a marketing perspective, the paradigm could not be comprehended). We went traditional. Again, small presses have also been buoyed by the digital printing (and cyber) revolution, and we joined the fray. From a writing perspective it allowed upcoming writers to get published without the backing of the Big Six, but at least get published. Using the career ladder metaphor, it got writers up a few rungs, which allowed access to the next higher points. The idea is to ‘make it’ as a small press as much as a writer. I discovered that there were grades of quality of publishers out there (mags as well as monographs), and as a writer there was often a market tuned to the degree of skills one had. This is goodness.

In the end I chose not to self publish. I know people who did and did well by it (the majority of these successes, however, gained recognition and ended up moving to the ‘dark side’ in order to complete the process of ‘making it’). They are a small number. The majority of self publishers achieve the goal of getting their book onto Amazon.com and Barnes and Noble and sell less than a hundred units, the majority by family and friends. A very large percentage of them are poor writers and should never have published – they just convinced themselves they are good or great, and the companies that sell services are happy not to say a thing, or worse, fan the illusion. Many of these books have poor covers and the stuff between is rife with spelling errors, sad grammar, typos, formatting issues, and brimming with all the stylistic errors an unedited and immature author could possibly come up with. I can go on but I wont. The real tragedy here is that these millions of people drag the entire system down with them. Yes, publishing on demand is great, and so is digital publishing, and being able to get up there is fantastic, but it is almost meaningless when you have 10,000 science fiction romance novels being marketed on Facebook, Twitter, Goodreads and goodness knows what else, at the very same time. Digitial publishing only accentuates the situation. So much more can now be (rapidly) published. It hurts the good, talented writers, and it has also destabilized the industry.

I would be the first person to shake the hands of anyone who says that the industry needs a shaking – because in my mind, from a writer’s perspective, the old model was not helpful to writers. The poor royalties, the way newly signed authors were given next to no marketing budget, etc etc. This was not good. However, I don’t see the shifts helping them much either. I have huge respect for Konrath and his success in going it alone in the digital publishing world, but I can’t personally see the logical path between his (and some others’ success) with a viable model for upcoming writers, and in particular, separating the wheat from the chaff.

In a funny sort of way I see publishing history as having not moved much at all in this particular respect. Generalizing, 50 years ago it was hard to ‘make it’ because publishing was an expensive business and so openings were slight. 25 years ago it was hard to ‘make it’ because greedy corporations preferred to court the shallow, and simply regurgitate the existing stables of authors. Today the good ones have to wade through the human masses, with the strong possibility of getting nowhere, and the traditional publishers are floundering and becoming squeamish with new signings.

And yet, I think there is hope. I’m not going to spew the old adage of ‘if you’re good, you will eventually get there’. No siree. I don’t believe that is always the case. But what I can say is that there are smart ways to help differentiate yourself and get noticed. This is the key: differentiation. One way is to work the social network and possibly in combo with self publishing. Some can do it, but they have to be truly masterful in those disciplines. This is not for me, and I genuinely believe that only a miniscule percentage of people are good at it.

For me, differentiation is by way of short stories. I have traveled back in time 3 years and have concluded that an effective way to be noticed (in the speculative fiction field), is to wow the elite with short stories. Haven’t quite made it yet, but I believe I am close to it. This, at least, is my strategy. In the specfic world a handful of top 10 mag publications IS noticed by publishers in the field. Even better, a Nebula or Hugo wouldn’t hurt (oops, dreaming again). And yes, it is tough to break in. But you know what? I genuinely believe there are two magnificent advantages in going this route: 1. Yes it is hard, but I believe it is a market that is more open than novels in the traditional publishing field; and 2. It well and truly separates the wheat from the chaff. You can’t publish crap in Asimov‘s, Apex or Interzone. It’s just not possible. In fact, you can’t publish in middling mags or anthologies with crap either. The ladder is pretty predictable.

I know some writers don’t like writing short fiction, or perhaps even can’t. If such writers have another differentiating strategy, then that hole is plugged. I suggest – kindly – that if a writer has the skills, talent and determination to ‘make it’, then the short story route is something worthy of serious consideration.

For me, only time will tell whether I am wheat or chaff.
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Cover Reveal for Anthology of Ichor III: Gears of Damnation

It would appear that Anthology of Ichor III: Gears of Damnation, will be released on time in April 2011. My short story, The Happy Mouth, is one of the 14 short stories contained therein (along with 2 full length novels) totaling to 550 pages. A large tome (tomb?) indeed.

Thanks to Unearthed Press for including my Mythos story into their project.

So here's the cover – pretty full on; I like it.

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Published: She Has Been Here

A revamped short story of mine, She Has Been Here, has been published by The Fringe Magazine (ezine, and it has been chosen to be published in pdf format at a later date). This has two important features to it, for me. Firstly, She Has Been Here is one of those stories where I have a a special love for, and so I am pleased indeed to publish it. I had trouble publishing it over some time, in part because it is very hard to classify – is it a love story? A fantasy? A ghost story? Historical Fiction? Maybe all, perhaps even more. I also have to admit that I have become a better writer (hey, practice makes perfect), and with a small polish, it is a better story – I can thank a few editors from other magazines who rejected my story, and taking the trouble to say a few words of constructive criticism.

The second reason why I am especially pleased is because The Fringe is an Australian magazine – remarkably, my first Australian publishing effort.
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Editing Progress: Ian Hall’s Opportunities: Jamie Leith in DariΓ©n

In my role as editor in IFWG Publishing, I have the pleasure of working with new titles coming through our pipeline. I certainly can add Ian Hall’s Opportunities: Jamie Leith in Darién, as one of them. I’m at just over 80% through the copy editing phase, and then we turn it over to the proofing cycles.

IFWGP is a speculative fiction specialist publisher, but we don’t mind delving into other genres, on occasion. Ian’s work is quite long – around 200k, but this is not uncommon for historical fiction.  There is a tendency for historical titles to have a bit more meat to it, and oh, what a delightful repast it is! I have to say it is difficult indeed to refrain from divulging what happens in detail – but let may say this: it has it all. "All in what way?" you may ask. My response is simple – "what do you expect to happen in an adventure set in 1699 with a heck of a lot of sea voyaging?" In the Caribbean. *smirky grin*
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Aurealis Magazine – Poor PR

Something interesting for you Australian specfic writers, or those who are interested in Aurealis Magazine. Their editor has retired and they are closed to submissions. Those who submitted prior to the closure are totally in the dark – every query gets a stock standard blurb which makes no statement on the status of pre-closure submissions.

Their PR is poor indeed.

I sent an email query to the editor email address as well as another, generic address. When I got the following, I sent an email back to a ‘Stephen’, and got exactly the same blurb back. They are clearly not reading their email AT ALL.

Here is an image of the blurb. Try to work out how it responds to a query about what the status of pre-closure emails are about:

With the retirement of current editor, Stuart Mayne, the publishers of Aurealis, are taking the
opportunity to restructure and improve the magazine. The new look Aurealis will be in place by the end
of 2011. In the meantime, AurealisXpress, our monthly e-bulletin for subscribers will continue. We
will be open for story submissions again around the middle of the year. Updates will be published in
AurealisXpress and on the website http://www.aurealis.com.au.

All orders (books, back issues etc.) will continue to be processed as usual.

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How Important Is Reading for an Author?

I’m sure some who read my subject title think its a trivial subject; a no brainer. "Of course it is important to read other writers’ fiction, to improve." I agree at that level, but it actually has more to it.

For one thing, as a writer I am driven to write whenever I can and reading encroaches on my time. I have to do my day job, I have responsibilities to my family, including my daughter, etc etc. With what’s left, I have to make priority decisions. This is the most obvious consideration.

Another area of concern is the degree in which we immerse ourselves into other writers’ styles and worlds, and it can chip away at our own inspiration. I have heard writers say that other people’s stories (be it fiction, cinema, plays etc) inspire them for their stories – I do have some concern here as I believe it can, from a particular degree of exposure, stifle creativity. It’s a balancing act.

For much of my life I have been a copious reader – mostly speculative fiction, but no small amount of other genres and non-fiction, poetry and so on. When I started to write seriously, I almost closed it off completely. I needed the time to write, not read, and I genuinely felt I could generate my own creativity without the need for inspiration from other writers. It worked for me, but only for a few years. As I developed my skills, somewhat like an athlete developing their fitness, there comes a time when one has a hyper-sensitized skill level to detect what is needed for the next step up. I realized I needed to read more; much more.

Jay Lake, the voluminous bloggist and excellent, well-respected speculative fiction writer, blogged just on this topic and referred to the dual role that must be balanced – the consumer versus the producer. Here is his fifth part of the discussion with references to his earlier posts. He puts a valid case forward that there is a time and place for each, and I entirely agree with him.

Before Jay produced his interesting set of blogs with thesis, I made a New Year’s Resolution at the start of 2011. Eleven in fact. One of them was that I would read more. Much more. I set the goal of 24 books – any genre, style etc, and would include the books I edit. It isn’t a case of categorization here, it is to do with keeping the synapses running, exploring new ways of doing things by way of other’s experience, and ultimately finding your own unique style and inspiration, and writing better stories for it.
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Special

My short story, Special (which is a science fiction, concerning autism) has been accepted in an anthology titled Flying Island Press Benefit: Autism Awareness. As you can tell by the title, this is a benefit anthology with proceeds going to an Autism fund raising benefit. 

It’s not too late for new submissions to be accepted (noting it requires a strong autism plotline, or character, to qualify).

It will be released in June 2011.
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Comfort #2

This continues an earlier discussion (thread really) regarding my story conception of The Comfort of Beanbags, which I originally wrote as a short story. Here is the earlier discussion.

In line with the most basic of writing tenets, I know that this story should not be longer than what is needed in the telling, and with more time spent conceptualising this story than any other, I believe it should be more like novella – perhaps (gut feeling) around 30k. I have come up with lots of ideas on world building, and I am happy how it has settled. Very happy. However, I have never had to take so much time coming to this final form.

Now to do it. πŸ™‚

Submission Acceptance: The Bond

Nice turnover.

My steampunk short story, The Bond, has been accepted by Rune Wright, in their Penny Dread Tales Vol 1:  Gears, Coils, Aether & Steam anthology. Their cover is pretty amazing – you can catch a glimpse in the submissions page (they are still asking for submissions) – http://www.runewright.com/submissions.html

I wrote the short on 8 March.

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